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So I am going to let this be printed on a black t-shirt :'D
I like this drawing very much! It was so fun to make all those beads! and I love this colour scheme =w=
so Hope you like it :'D
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Hello! Here is your critique from#CritiCentrum :)

Negatives
- What grabbed my attention first is the way you draw muscles and bones. It's good you've tried to draw the muscles on her belly but they're not right. And what is that bobble under her belly button..? I've never seen someone with a bobble there ^^; Take a good look at pictures of bellies and try to image where the muscle would be. You've got one going from the side of your hip down, and from the middle of your chest to the sides. And in the middle of these is your belly button. Also I see you draw a horizontal line by her elbow, but when an arm is stretching it's better to draw a vertical one (:
- Your coloration is really pretty but you've got to work on your shades and work neather. Make sure that when drawing a line of the line-art, you draw it in one, smooth motion. Your current lines are very sketchy. This can have it's charm but it mostly makes it look sloppy done. also I'd suggest you to draw less lines for the hair. Only draw extra lines at the sides of the strokes hair (: And about coloration, you don't have a light source. Of course you don't always need to have one, but even with or without one I see you're placing some shadows at the wrong place- or not placing them where they need to be. To start with, the clavicles (sleutelbeenderen) These are bones sticking out, so what is the shadow doing at TOP of it? That's like a mountain with shadow at it's peak, and light in descent. The shades should be behind the clavicles a little, and underneath them. Again, take a picture for example :) I also see shades at the nose. Unless the light source if from underneath, the shades from the nose should mostly be beside it. A tip for placing shades: Think where the light comes from, and image where it can't come. Is there an arm for it? Does that stroke of hair block a light ray for in the face?

Now don't think you've done a lot wrong, you didn't at all ;) It just looks like a lot because it's a lot to explain ^^; Anyway, onto the positives ~

Positives
- The color scheme is lovely! And I really like how you've add glitters to band around her chest :D
- The design is really nice, and her apearance fits her facial expression: Like a wild, ancient girl who loves to live and hunt ;D
- The coloration of the eyes is very pretty (although you do should consider drawing the iris some smaller, else it'll be hard to decide what place she's looking at..)
- The beads, the marks, the background: All togheter they are well chosen and give it a happy, pretty and exotic look. It's perfect for a t-shirt! :D

That's it (: I hope this could help! Thank you for submitting to :iconcriticentrum: :)